Title: So It Begins
Author: StartTheFantasy
Progress: Work in Progress
Rated: M
Summary:
24 year old, Bella Swan has been consumed with her studies and career all her life. Never having time to date. Her friends, Alice and Rosalie, make sure to torment her on her status of being a virgin. Bella makes a haste decision to rectify the situation one night, as she heads off to the opening of a new nightclub, 'Ice' with her two best friends in tow. As the night grows on, Bella's friends have ditched her at the bar as she begins to contemplate her life up till this point. While lost in her thoughts, enter Edward Cullen .
Edward Cullen, 26 years old and owner of 'Ice' is known as a playboy to most everyone, but the truth is he's only been with 3 other women in his life. Edward hides behind his club 'Ice' so that he isn't suspected by the authorities and others in the Mafia world. He is a private man, therefore, making it extremely difficult for people to know of his real profession, as one of the world's ruthless and deadliest Mafia bosses. Edward Cullen sits down beside a stunning brunette one night in his bar, and his whole world shifts in a matter of a night.
Will what two people first start out to believe is a one-night stand, but come morning is so much more, lead to forever?
Review:
This story is definitely very different from your normal mafia story with the Twilight gang. You get the usual Twilight characters, but just a little bit at a time. This story definitely goes a bit of a different direction than the usual mafia storyline. However, I can't say that that's a bad thing because a change from the usual is always a good way to freshen things up. You definitely have Mafiaward, of course, but he's also very sweet, which isn't something that you always expect in these mafia story. And trust me I've read a fair share of Mafiawards and they aren't always as sweet as this Edward that you're going to see. But you'll only get to experience it if you READ THIS STORY! Also, if lemons are one of the things that you look forward in a story then I suggest reading this one. It has some really nice lemons in it and, even though you get a lemon right in the first chapter, I can't say that it completely overruns the story like so many others. I do have to say that the relationship goes fast, but it also feels like time slows down, or that could just be me.
This really is a good story that should be given a chance and if you haven't notice, I've provided you with the full-scale summary, so that should be incentive enough for you to go check it out. I SWEAR you will not regret it if you go read this story. I really look forward to when the latest update of this story comes out and I look forward to any future works that StartTheFantasy has coming up in the future.
Like it! Yes!
Love it! Of course!
Reread it! I just did before I wrote this review, and I think I've reread it before that too.
Recommend it! Heck yes! Of course!
Awww! Thanks for reviewing my fanfic! It's nice seeing people enjoy reading other people's hard work; enough to write a piece to share with those who haven't ran across it yet.
ReplyDeleteI apologize to those who have been waiting for an update for so long, but life happens. You have to learn to roll with the punches, as I have been doing for the past five years.
Thanks to you and all the others out there for reading!
Much love... xx
Leslie